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November 6, 2009
November 7, 2009, 9:01 am
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************Friday Flash 55*****************

Okay, G-Man…here it goes…


The jazz played softly in the background as she sipped her favorite tea. It was hot and burned her lips, but she didn’t notice.

As her mind wandered aimlessly through the hallways of her past, she was reminded of the smell of night blooming jasmine, growing ’round a doorway.

A tear rolled down her cheek.


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Really touching. I’ve been in that hazy daze too ~ and not in the too distant past. The tear rolling down the cheek … nice touch.

My 55 is posted: Flash 55 ~ Awakening

Comment by Chef Kar

aww…this 55 made me a little sad and made me wonder just wat was on her mind. nicely played, you left me wanting more.

mine is up!

Comment by brian miller

Annie…
Excellent 55 My Dear!
You know your way around a story, thats for sure!
Thank you so much for returning to the fold…:-)
Have a Wonderful Week-End…G

Comment by G-Man

wow you brought a tear drop to mind with these words! Hallways of her past! love that, could do a blog with that title!
found myself wondering where the flower was from… her childhood home or a home of a lover?

Nice to meet you, and please come say hello and see my 55 efforts

Comment by jennifer

Memories can bring tears. Great 55ve!

Comment by mona

Oh that jasmine!

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